Happy to help—please paste the article text you want revised.
A couple quick questions so I get it right:
– Keep the length roughly the same, or okay to tighten/expand?
– Tone preference: formal, neutral, or conversational?
– Should I use those exact transitions (“Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” “Well, here it is.”) or just similar, natural alternatives?
– Keep headings/subheadings and any SEO keywords as-is?
– US or UK English?
Example of the kind of edits I’ll make:
– Original: “This report outlines the main risks. Besides that, it reviews mitigation steps. Therefore, leaders must act.”
– Revised: “The report outlines the main risks. What’s interesting too, it reviews mitigation steps. Well, here it is: leaders must act.”
Send the text when ready, and I’ll deliver a varied mix of sentence lengths and voices, swap out “This” openers, replace those transitions, and avoid repeating paragraph starters.