Happy to do that. Please paste the article text, and I’ll return a revised version with:
– Varied sentence lengths and a mix of active/passive voice
– Sentences that start with “This” rephrased
– “Besides that” and “Therefore” replaced with “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” or “Well, here it is.”
– Paragraph openings diversified to avoid repeating the same word
If you want a quick preview of how I’ll edit, here’s a tiny example:
Original:
This report explains the causes. Besides that, it lists solutions. Therefore, we recommend immediate action.
Rewritten:
The report explains the causes. What’s interesting too, it lists solutions. Well, here it is: we recommend immediate action.
Notes:
– Tone: “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is.” are casual. Tell me if you prefer a more formal set of transitions.
– Length: I can keep the overall length similar or tighten/expand—your call.